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My Sweet Baboo

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Sweetie Belle was walking down Ponyville square on her way to Sugarcube corner one sunny Sunday afternoon. She had just finished helping Rarity with some chores, and had been given 20 bit’s for her hard work she was no determined to spend on something sweet to eat. As she approached Sugarcube corner the door swung open and Spike who Sweetie Belle had a crush on rush out of the sweet shop, nearly knocking her down.


“Sorry, kind of in a rush, got to go, bye” Spike said hurriedly as he rushed off down the street, a giant heart shaped box in his hands.


“What was that thing he was carrying?” Sweetie Belle wondered after him. Then a though crept into her mind.” Wait, today is Heart’s and Hooves day! My Sweet Baboo has gotten me a giant valentine.” She squeed in excitement jumping up and down before suddenly thinking “Oh my gosh, I’d better get something just as amazing for him!”


She rushed into Sugarcube corner and approached the counter where Pinkie Pie was standing taking orders. “Oh hi Sweetie Belle, what can I g...” Pinkie Pie started, but was cut off by Sweetie Belle instantly.


“QUICK I NEED A REALLY BIG BUT NOT TO EXPENSIVE VALENTINE FOR MY SWEET BABOO!!!” she cried.


“Okie dokie lokie” Pinkie Pie said, not even one bit phased by Sweeties outburst. “One sec” she bounced off to the back before returning with a heart shaped box half the size of the one Spike was carrying. “This is the biggest least expensive box of chocolates we have, 20 bit’s please.”


“Well it’s not as big as the one Spike has, but it will do” Sweetie Belle quickly paid her, and rushed back home with the box.





Later that day Sweetie Belle was back in sugar cube corner awaiting for Spike to arrive to present her with her gift. “And when he arrives I think I’ll pucker up and give him a big kiss” she stated to her sister who just rolled her eyes and continued trying to ignore her. Just then the doorbell rang. Sweetie Belle rushed past Rarity to open the door, to find Spike standing there, with the box of candy she had seen earlier hidden behind his back.
‘Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Spiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiike” Sweetie greeted him happily.


“Oh Hai Sweetie Belle” Spike reply nervously.


“What is that behind your back?” she asked coyly


“Nothing, nothing” Spike replied, trying to peer over her shoulder. “Listen…i…is ..is Rarity home?”


“Rarity?” sweetie repeated slightly annoyed. “Yea she’s here, what do you want her for?”


“Well I kind of wanted to get her something and…” Spike was suddenly cut off as Rarity rushed over barreling Sweetie Belle over in the process.


“Oh Spikey Wikey, that’s soooo sweet of you.” Rarity said happily.


“It was nothing.” Spike replied sheepishly. “I just wanted something to show you how I feel about you and…” Spike was once again cut off by Rarity kissing him fully on the lips while Sweetie Belle stared on in horror.



Later that day twilight was disturbed from her studies by a knock on the door, and opened it to find Sweetie Belle standing there looking rather peeved.


“Is my Sweet Baboo home?” she asked.


“Tell her I’m NOT her Sweet Baboo” Spike replied from inside.


“Can you tell him I said thank you for the valentine he gave me?” Sweetie Belle continued.


“Tell her I DID NOT give her a valentine!” Spike replied angrily from inside.


“Don’t you know SARCASM when you hear it?” Sweetie Belle shouted from the door” while Twilight getting annoyed by this retreated back inside.


“Tell her i…” Spike started but was abruptly cut off by Twilight picking him out of the chair with her magic and throwing him out of the house and into a pile of snow he has just shoveled off the walk way earlier that day.


“YOU TOO WORK THIS OUT YOURSELF’S, YOU ARE BOTH DRIVING ME CRAZY!!!!” she shouted, and then slammed the door behind her.


“I just wanted to thank you for the valentine you sent me.” Sweetie Belle began again walking toward him.


“I never got you a valentine!” Spike replied from under the snow.


“DON’T YOU KNOW SARCASM WHEN YOU HEAR IT?” Sweetie Belle shouted.

          The End
Just a short story i came up with after failing to write two slightly bigger stories. I also happened to watch the Charlie Brown Valentines special last night (yea i know, slowpoke), which helped with the idea for this :)

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That picture alone gave me diabeetus. :overreact: